My Amazon and Goodreads review of The Heaven & Earth Grocery Store by James McBride (Rating 3) – Cluttered. The Heaven and Earth Grocery Store by James McBride is the story of pre-WWII Chicken Hill, a poor area in Pottstown, Pennsylvania inhabited by Jews and Negroes. Among the “good” Jews are Chona, the generous proprietress of the title establishment, and her open-minded husband, Moshe, a theater entrepreneur. Among the “good” Negroes are Nate, a hard-working man with a past, and his good-hearted and loyal wife Addie, who have taken in Dodo, their bright but deaf orphaned nephew who the State wants to cart off to an “educational” mental institution. The town itself harbors many “bad” bigots, most notably the despised but powerful Doc Roberts. The collusion of Negroes and Jews to save Dodo drives the story, but what should be a propulsive tale is instead a novel cluttered with less-than-minor characters, confusing plot fragments, and digressions that merely show off the author’s wit. McBride needs an editor with the chutzpah to tell him to cut three-quarters of the self-indulgent prose. As a novelist myself (see my Amazon author page and Goodreads author page), I’ve learned that at least ninety-percent of the fascinating (to me) information I discover in my research should remain in my notes. Facts serve fiction when they further character and plot. Otherwise, they belong in engaging nonfiction tracts. The Heaven & Earth Grocery Store is somewhat redeemed by the touching Epilogue, but it doesn’t justify the hours spent reading what precedes it. If you enjoyed McBride’s Deacon King Kong, you’ll probably like The Heaven & Earth Grocery Store. If, like me, you were irritated by the former, I expect you’ll be impatient with his latest book too.
A community unites to save a boy
Why writers read: “My alma mater was books, a good library I could spend the rest of my life reading, just satisfying my curiosity.” – Malcolm X
Guess I’ll pass on this one